Hi Kohatu,I like how you writ your story. You got to do some more about you like you age and your favorite movie keep the good work up.From Creedence
Hey KohatuI really like your little short story about yourelf, you just need to add more to it if you are aloud to. I really like Mc Donalds to it is really nice. keep up the good work
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Hi Kohatu,
I like how you writ your story. You got to do some more about you like you age and your favorite movie keep the good work up.
From Creedence
Hey Kohatu
I really like your little short story about yourelf, you just need to add more to it if you are aloud to. I really like Mc Donalds to it is really nice. keep up the good work
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