Thursday, November 7, 2013

Jade, the nurse.

Once upon a time there was a nurse in a hospital. Her name was Jade. Jade had a hat and it was red and white. Jades hat got lost. Her mum helped her find it. They found it in the bushes. Jade felt happy.
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13 comments:

Halatoa said...

Hi its me Halatoa I like the story you wrote because he found his hat.

November 8, 2013 at 1:46 PM
Amato said...

Hi jade

I like your story and how you used full stop nice work and keep it up.

from Amato

November 8, 2013 at 1:49 PM
Juanita said...
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November 8, 2013 at 1:50 PM
Abdurrahman said...

Hi Room 2

I like your story I was worried when Jade lost his hat but when he found it he was happy. Did you do it all alone or together?

By Abdurrahman.

November 8, 2013 at 1:52 PM
Juanita said...

Hi it a good story but full stop keep it up.

November 8, 2013 at 1:54 PM
Saruja said...

Hi Room 2

I red your story it is worried because he lose jade hat.The story is interesting .

November 8, 2013 at 2:02 PM
Ana said...

Hi Jade

It's good you found your hat and nice story I like how you had a full stop at the end keep it up.

November 8, 2013 at 2:05 PM
rilley said...

That was such a great story jade.

November 8, 2013 at 2:07 PM
Nesi said...

Hi room 2

WOW! looks amazing. Keep up the good work.

From Nesi

November 8, 2013 at 2:46 PM
Deziree said...

HI ROOM 2, It's me Deziree

I really like the end how Jade the nurse found her hat again hope she was so HAPPY finding her hat again.

Your Sincerely,Deziree in Room 7

November 11, 2013 at 1:56 PM
Savannah said...

Hai there

I like your story about Jade the nurse I'm glad she found her hate again.

Great work!

November 11, 2013 at 2:08 PM
Tai said...

Jade I like your story you got fullstops that is great

November 11, 2013 at 2:15 PM
Juanita said...

I really like your story it is a great story.

November 22, 2013 at 2:01 PM

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